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poetman
Junior Member

since 2009-03-30

Posts 10

0 posted 2009-03-30 03:17 AM

Can I fly

I dream of flying and soaring through the clouds
Yet I have my doubts
If it was my story then it took a wrong turn
have I grown grass where there should be ferns?

I can remember a tiny light floating with me
Have I forgotten then let it be
Was it my imagination or was it real
did I fall out of my pram, was that the deal?

Is the island I dream of really there
If not then I fear
that my my dreams are nothing but fantasy
there where you never grow old

Is my name Peter?
or did I grow up in a room with a fan
Is there something like a fairy?
Or are they berry's

Did I fight with swords and did I fly
If I had but do not any more, then why don't I cry?
Why am I so adventures and am I Peter Pan

[This message has been edited by poetman (03-31-2009 08:43 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-03-30 06:54 AM

Welcome to the blue skies where poets can soar!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2009-03-30 09:48 AM

Welcome to PiP, Poetman.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2009-03-30 10:08 AM

nice work

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2009-03-30 01:46 PM

sometimes we don't see ourselves as others do see us...

Welcome

poetman
Junior Member

since 2009-03-30

Posts 10

5 posted 2009-03-31 08:39 AM

Thanks for helping, English is my second language. Thanks for advice and emails

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-03-31 12:40 PM

Welcome to Passions, poetman! I applaud you writing in your second language! *S*

angellea
Member

since 2009-03-29

Posts 144
NC, USA

7 posted 2009-04-01 01:15 PM

Bravo! Had you not posted that English is your second language, I would never have known.

Never grow up! :-)

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