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Buried Treasures |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Legends of lost gems and gold. Have been searched by young and old. A treasure trove they hope to find. Of all the trinkets left behind. The treasure maps are studied with care. In hopes of making a find so rare. Many secrets lie below. Hidden there so long ago. The buried treasures of the deep. Claimed by sea to forever keep. Jewels submerged now in the sand. Searched by many hungry hands. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Fun, Clever write, I enjoy watching the treasure hunters adventures, and find it most ineresting when they find a lost ship. I find most of my treasures buried here in these deep blue pages, and will include this one, Tracey. |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Really like the first stanza of this. From gems and gold to trinkets. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, Eloise. I like the reference to "hungry hands." ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, Eloise. I like the reference to "hungry hands." ida |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
The stories of the treasure of the sea intrigue me. Thanks to all of you for stopping by and commenting. Eloise |
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