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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-03-31 02:35 PM





Perhaps It Will Take Time

I wonder would I write again
Its still too early to tell
Nothing seems to flow
Going through this dry spell

With my attempt to explain
I need to remove doubt
Still for days I had tried
To break the writing drought

As nervous butterflies within
Had fluttered endlessly
Feelings of uneasiness
It is what I am hoping to free

It was not easy to overcome
Perhaps it will take time
Its not worthwhile writing
About the self doubt of mine


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-31 03:41 PM


quote:
As nervous butterflies within
Had fluttered endlessly
Feelings of uneasiness
It is what I am hoping to free



Never nurture any self doubt, dear Hope. May you always come to the conclusion that you are uniquely beautiful and gifted.

You wrote this beautifully.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-03-31 05:24 PM


self doubt can overwhelm the good there is in this life~~

hugging you
M

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
3 posted 2009-03-31 06:34 PM


"I wonder would I write again
Its still too early to tell
Nothing seems to flow
Going through this dry spell"

You just did and very nicely done.  

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