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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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 Pedestal Waiting, wondering, What more can I do? He has me placed, On this pedestal, I live as his wife, With no wants, or needs, I do as I’m asked, I am here to please, Does he know how, I wish to be free, Could I have my own thoughts, Do I dare, just be me? How I long to step down, And simply walk away, No longer his trophy, I would do it my way, Yet no matter how, I wish to be free, I love that man, so, On his pedestal I will be. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Billy T!  you are GOOD at this! This is a beautiful beautiful picture and I never would have thought of her sitting there, that way. A great interpretation! |
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stacylynn418 Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40new york |
wow this is really good. im sure a lot of women can relate to it and it has a lot of meaning |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
WTB, I'd say you are a very lucky fellow to have someone like that sitting on a pedastal. Don't let her slip through your fingers. Enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo WTBAKELAR, That's a very pretty lady. Bobby |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thank you all so very much for your kind comments, The lovely woman in this piece is not mine, This portrait is a work of art by Steve Hanks, and the woman is just a work of art unto herself. Thanks for taking a look. WT. |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
I know you were thinking of your special little wife and I know she would not want to be anywhere else. Love you both. Mom |
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