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SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09
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0 posted 2009-03-30 07:31 PM



Jade as your eyes, softly still,
serene in their liquid longing
deep, into you my thoughts soar.

Is it in your eyes that I see,
or is it that I only abide there
in your quest for tranquility?

Alas. I am not the only one
to swim in the iris of your heart.
Once as was a longing for others
you possessed at the start.

As the years pressed on,
you found in their eyes,
misfortune, sorrow's fate,
broken hands tied.

With my love, I can only
wipe away bitter tears,
as fate eroded the
youth of your years.

Gently, mend each piece,
as your broken dreams part,
with a truest love born
from the depths of my heart.

I cannot heal all the scars their
time has claimed. Permitted
on your soul as a cavern the
gold miners craved.

Now that I am in your eyes,
tell me, what do you see?
My heart pouring out it's color
for thee?

You proclaim I am,
your dream waited for,
the one of hope
to stumble through your door?

I only have one thing
to offer of me,
...all that I am,
or ever would be.

I only lay claim, to your love,
which you so freely give of
your color.

Jade as your eyes.
softly still, serene in their
liquid longing, deep, into you

my thoughts soar.


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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2009-03-30 07:34 PM



WELCOME TO PIP!!!


ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-03-30 07:36 PM


Welcome to Passions!

I enjoyed your poetry!

~ARH

SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09
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3 posted 2009-03-30 07:50 PM


Thank you both for the warm welcome. I hope to stay for awhile, I find it very nice here... and the reading is quite wonderful.
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
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4 posted 2009-03-31 12:50 PM


Alas. I am not the only one
to swim in the iris of your heart.

I love this image and liked your poem a lot. *S* Welcome to Passions!!

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Gaia
5 posted 2009-03-31 03:43 PM


This is a fine offering you've given us on these blue pages. Welcome!
SeraphimBroken
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6 posted 2009-04-01 07:18 PM


Thank's for the kind words! I hope to write more here, and I love to read all the wonderful writings!
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