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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-03-30 05:50 PM


How different is the
world now, seen by
eyes connected by strings
of contentment to a
heart of relaxed temperance
and equable insouciant acceptance.
In the now of
a soul still full,
bursting to give all,
within is a shoreline
i gently amble along
with a happy smile
of remembrance, giving prayers
for my lifes loves.
Freedom is fulsome and
freshly blown onto
my face, translucent salt
tasting on my lips,
invigorating me, to bring
alive my inner being
for the future still
to encounter my joy.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2009-03-30 07:17 PM


tasting on my lips,
invigorating me, to bring
alive my inner being
for the future still
to encounter my joy.................."

Enjoyed your thoughts Goldernrose! ~ Very poetic Nice to see you back here at Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-03-30 07:17 PM



Phil, this warm write is filled with the sense of calmness and acceptance. It's wonderful to have you back. I'm hoping you'll share some nature walk writes with us again.

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2009-03-30 07:29 PM


Welcome Back! Nice to see you are well!...I agree with Midnight sun, write some more nature poems..lol

~ARH

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-03-30 08:32 PM


different for sure, i like the way you think
suthern
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Louisiana
5 posted 2009-03-31 12:52 PM


i gently amble along
with a happy smile

Contentment looks good on you... welcome back! *S*

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2009-03-31 12:56 PM


Phil,

It's most certainly grand to see you gracing these
blue pages again with an especially fine 'write'!

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2009-03-31 01:21 PM


quote:
In the now of
a soul still full,
bursting to give all,
within is a shoreline
i gently amble along
with a happy smile
of remembrance, giving prayers
for my lifes loves.



Dear Phil, you have written a wonderful poem of deep consciousness. I am glad you are back.

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2009-03-31 04:15 PM


Goldenrose - when one is at peace the eyes see things a lot different than when in turmoil. Nice write...

BC

Goldenrose
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9 posted 2009-03-31 04:41 PM


Arctic Wind..glad you could share and enjoy my thoughts, it is good to be back....

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2009-03-31 04:46 PM


Kacy....thank you for your kind words as ever...calm and acceptance are all we can hope for in this life, why worry about things we cannot change?

Hopefully i may be able to post something about nature walks soon, especially now spring is here...thank you again...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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11 posted 2009-03-31 04:50 PM


ARH...it is good to be back, though perhaps i may not be a prolific poster.Yes i am indeed well and calm and yes maybe spring will bring me new possibilities to post about nature...thank you for your kind words...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2009-03-31 04:55 PM


Dark Star...being different is not always accepted, but then we all cannot be popular, sometimes being on the outside gives us a different and unique perspective, though i am no better or worse than anybody else...glad you like the way i think..thank you for your reply...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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13 posted 2009-03-31 04:59 PM


Southern....contentment is what i feel because acceptance is all i can offer with any real merit...it is good to be back..hopefully to write something more...thank you for your kindness...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2009-03-31 05:02 PM


Bruce..it is surely good to be back if only to be reminded of the goodness that resides in people like yourself and the real words of kindness that you reply with...thank you for your kind words...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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15 posted 2009-03-31 05:04 PM


Margherita....my words are written from where i am now, my state of mind is such that it allows me to write this way...i am pleased that you enjoyed my current state of mind...thank you for your kind words.

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

Goldenrose
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16 posted 2009-03-31 05:08 PM


Bill ..yes you are correct they do see things differently, the trick is trying not to allow too much turmoil in your life, and if it is there it is just negative energy and has no place in anybody's life, accepting it dimminshes its importance and calmness returns..thank you for your kind words..

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
17 posted 2009-03-31 05:19 PM


wonderful to see you back and know you are well~~


M

Goldenrose
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18 posted 2009-03-31 06:22 PM


M..thank you for the welcome back and yes i am well, i hope that you have also been as well as can be...

Goldenrose.

Love is to think about someone else more times in a day than you think of yourself...Anon.

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