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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-03-30 10:11 AM


Lay yourself down in gossamer clouds
Lose any sense of recorded time
Feel only a mouth upon you
Lips brushing through your mind

Tendrils of smoky fingers caress
Tongues of dancing flames
Licking higher through darkened air
Tortured heat barely constrained

How much can you stand you wonder
Have never felt such inner peace
You want to not think of reality thoughts
Hoping the feelings never cease

Floating upon your back arched in repose
Firm hands under and guiding you
Electric impulses with steady waves
Following the current coursing through

Sight grows dim and tunneled forward
Senses alive in ethereal overload
To the point of no return and repeated
Slave to the gossamer afterglow


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whoa baby!

awesome....

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-03-30 12:19 PM


Thank you, Ms. awesome. *S*
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3 posted 2009-03-31 11:45 AM


Sight grows dim and tunneled forward
Senses alive in ethereal overload
To the point of no return and repeated
Slave to the gossamer afterglow

Such servitude is one to seek! *S* Beautiful write!!

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4 posted 2009-03-31 01:15 PM


quote:
Senses alive in ethereal overload



Very vivid!

Love,
Margherita

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