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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2009-03-24 12:07 PM

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2009-03-24 12:16 PM

Hi Bill...you've sure got romance in the way you see and write!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-03-24 12:56 PM

*goodness*

I think this is one of the sweetest poems I've read from you

I like it very much!

Marc-Andre
Senior Member

since 2008-12-07

Posts 501

3 posted 2009-03-24 02:21 PM

Bill, a very sweet verse indeed. One nit: in the second stanza, L6, I'd go with "close them again."

Mark

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-03-24 04:02 PM

Enjoyed this Beautiful Write Bill!

ARCTIC WIND

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-03-24 05:30 PM

This is absolutely beautiful, Bill... bravo!!! *S*

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

6 posted 2009-03-24 06:52 PM

There is so much intimate, well articulated, tender beauty here Bill.

You have a true poets soul.

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2009-03-24 08:33 PM

ah Bill, I do admire how you do these!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2009-03-24 08:36 PM

Your moon is magnificent in the back and foreground of your romantic soul

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

9 posted 2009-03-24 08:46 PM

Yo Bill,

Yes, that's the way it is, and should be.

Bobby

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

10 posted 2009-03-24 09:19 PM

Yes it is a sweet and tender poem Bill

and written by a true poet. Great post.

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2009-03-25 11:31 PM

Love it, love it, love it!

This is romance at it's best!!

Beautiful work, Bill Charles!!

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

12 posted 2009-03-30 10:20 PM

Bill

Very romantic. The picture is beautiful with all of the stories and people in it. You have outdone yourself on this one.

Ariana

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

13 posted 2009-03-30 11:37 PM

Beautiful,,, says it all.

Very nice, Tracey

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

14 posted 2009-03-30 11:57 PM

Bill, this is a beautiful and tender poem. Love the picture as well.
Eloise

MDupont
New Member

since 2009-03-31

Posts 2

15 posted 2009-03-31 03:26 AM

Great job. I really like this poem.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

16 posted 2009-03-31 12:58 PM

enchantment right now.

regards

yann

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