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Ribbons and Streams |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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I like to think heaven in it's purest form is weightless like the breath we breathe sustains us. Where we soar with the wind on a wing and prayer caressing the hearts of those we love drifting above the clouds destined to be. Over high seas misting the salt in our tears with a deep sigh that goes beyond the missing those feelings never waver. Surrounded by beauty in our endless journey the world spins and our spirit glides over mountain tops love changes things and completes us. We are never alone at days end embracing the world we have known we move past the pain in slow motionless strides along the edge of a lifetime. Darkness is short lived for the shadows of light cast against sunset cliffs cascade in transparent ribbons gracing every beat of our heart. Touched by the stars that fall adorning an angels halo we become one with natures stream forging paths around the sun we greet the dawn and find our peace within. |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 this is really really beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read and believe...James |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Hello Love your work. Hope you are well. Rick Delmonico |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent as always, Blues. Uplifting. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Love, love, love this one. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Lori, I feel uplifted by the most exquisite words you have forged here. Truly beautiful and poetically rich. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"I like to think heaven in it's purest form is weightless like the breath we breathe sustains us. Where we soar with the wind on a wing and prayer caressing the hearts of those we love drifting above the clouds destined to be. " Beautiful writing as always, Lor Hope all is well with you and your family  and lovep.s. let me know if you are ever in this neck of the woods~~ M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
nice touch bluzy... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding! Tucking this serene beauty into my library, as a spirit-booster on 'down' days. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Very deep and thoughtful poem, makes me contemplate peaceful thoughts and put things in life in perspective. Liked this. |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
i agree with you about heaven |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - a beautiful uplifting write, nicely done... BC |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lori...so good to read your words today...you still write into the heart of this reader. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is absolutely lovely, Bluesy one... great write!! |
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