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Arius Miura de Galdri
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0 posted 2009-03-30 10:46 PM


This is the first of 3 new poems that I wrote in March, thereby surpassing my goal of 2 for the month.  Yay!

“For Those Who Follow After”

As a race, where does our future lie?
We’re born, we live, grow old and then we die
We live too individually, it’s true
And care not what our fellow humans do

We constantly put off what must be done
So quick we are to turn around and run
By doing so, I fear we’ll make life worse
For those who follow after, like a curse

Our future generations soon will face
The procrastinated problems of our race
This selfish state of mind we seem to share
May prove to be too much for them to bear

Regrettably, I see no end in sight
To this, our unifying human plight
This indolence that seems to bind us all
Will someday cause our progeny to fall

March 11, 2009

AMdG

"My candle burns at both ends; it will not last the night; but ah, my foes, and oh, my friends--it gives a lovely light!"  -Edna St. Vincent Millay

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ken206573
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1 posted 2009-03-31 11:23 AM


I really like this poem. Nice to met you Arius, keep'em coming.


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