Open Poetry #44 |
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As if... Through a Mirror Darkly. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
![]() I have watched the shadows creep, and gather, wreathing stealthily about the bright, and shining golden hopes, that once, you shared with me; and as if... through a mirror, darkly; lit by candle, flickering pale, the hoping softly slips away, and only darkness still prevails. The mirror is all foxed, and misty; I cannot make out your face. I cannot reach out to touch you, in this shadowy, shuttered place to where, you have retreated; for such words I have, are trapped, it seems within this spider's web of cracks, all traced across the mirror's sheen. Despoiled and foggy; lost of substance; this reflection seems to be now, little more than vain illusion; seems to shimmer mockingly, whispering 'Your heart misleads your mind... oh, fool... can you not see there never was a "You" and "Her"... it was a selfish fantasy.' There is no depth now, in this mirror; it is, but a frosted screen. I cannot see into its heart; concealed, behind the hopes and dreams all seemingly, so shattered; strewn about the depths; lost from my view, so, was there really nothing there, at all? Did I so misread you? As if then, through a mirror, darkly... I reflect a fractured dream; a hope, for what we might have had; now lost, forever, it would seem. So, to this mirror of my heart, there really is no more to say and, nothing left for me to do; but quietly turn... and walk away. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
how achingly sad!! ![]() |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most effective "slice of everyman's-life" (loves lost) 'write'! fine imagery (both poetic and photographic) applause for this 'penning'!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Add my applause to this penning. I must admit, I have become quite a fan of your writing. Ida |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
so, was there really nothing there, at all? Did I so misread you? I know this ache of mistake all too well... beautiful sadness you've penned!! |
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