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Falling (song)
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Falling (song) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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(This is a song about losing love, and how love can be killed,(not killing oneself) and when we take that chance we put our heart on the line of life or death...the same story as Romeo and Juliet...) (This is written to be heavy with guitars, but melodic)  In an endless sky, we are but stars, slowing fading, cascading, In you heart, of hollow, I wish to fill, with love and song, blood tears shed, into a hearts bed, where pain dies, ghost of past, are made to rest, loves beam blinds, Shall I eat the dark,? take away your fears, shall I drink away, all of your tears? Blood stained memories, stains the heart and mind, never to be faded, your soul so jaded, Where will the darkness end? oh where can the love begin, confusion often blinds, line between lover or friend? (His part) When will it end? this pain deep inside? Make it go away, please come and stay, My heart is drowning, in memories endless tide, pain is frowning, to the love you placed inside, save me, save me, love is a suicide.... your heart lives, and then it dies, Pain cannot hide, love is a suicide, killing all feeling, till the heart has died.  Save me...save me... remove the darkness with light, save me, save me, spread your wings, take flight, angel of rescue I'm alive... angel of rescue, I'm alive... falling... falling... hold me in your arms tonight... (music, guitar solo)(soft then heavier build up) my heart burns till it dies, a flaming star, gave my life, shinning...shinning burning love across the sky, one last show of love divine, showing your heart is mine.. falling...falling... ever..deeper.. into your heart. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ARH ~ This is written with such passion and the ache of the heart! ~ Sad to know that people suffer broken hearts and have to live with that until it slowly heals! Hopefully nothing has happened in your life that sad!  I enjoyed reading this emotion filled song ~ I can hear myself listening to it!  to youARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I am saving this  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
UGH how embarrassing, i forgot to save it, OKAY clicking right now, I have been doing this all the time LOL, I forget to click the save button!ARCTIC WIND |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I know who this was for and I will keep it to my heart always. Sweetheart our time may yet come... In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I'll even write the guitar, bass and keys for these beautiful lyrics. I'd like to put a violin in there but they're tuned in 3rd's, so I've no idea how to harmonize them. In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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