Open Poetry #44 |
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The Surgeon |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
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THE SURGEON By Billie Cullimore He stands above you with a scalpel in his hand. He knows where to start, He has a plan. You lay on the table, everything is in place, With that stupid oxygen mask on your face. Hands and feet strapped tight. Soon you've lost all desire to fight. They've marked the spot where he's going to cut. Your last thought is, "Don't let him hiccup." You've trusted your life to this young man. Seems about the age of your grandson. It took years of study, strength and toil, And hours burning the :Midnight oil." God in his wisdom, choose this son. To reign among the Special ones. So you put your faith in this young man. Knowing that Gods Spirit,guides the Surgeons hand. [This message has been edited by Billie Cullimore (03-29-2009 01:15 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
![]() ![]() ![]() WELCOME TO PIP! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This is truely an inspired write. I am sure many can relate to putting their faith in the hands of others. Thank God for those that carry this burden Beautifully written. W.Tracey B. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Welcome to PIP, Billie. Hope to see more of your writing. Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Beautifully written! Welcome to Pip! Will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Billie Cullimore, The thought in this poem is very fine. If you ever plan to publish in the big world, watch the spelling of words like "hours". Bobby |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Thank you for catching my spelling I guess I hit the E insted of the R |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Billie Cullimore, My pleasure Hon--that’s what the forum is all about. Love Bobby |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
![]() ya know I never even thoguht of them having the hicups! Yikes.... it's a matter of trust, to say the least. welcome to pip!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These are tremendous moments indeed and we can't but surrender and trust. You have gifted us with a lovely first entry. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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