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Open Poetry #44
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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87
0 posted 2009-04-06 10:59 PM

Trickling into puddles;
My sadness is.
Pedals of a rose;
Floating tenderly.
No reflections,
For I am not there.
But with you,
Wishing I hadn’t been.
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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2009-04-07 05:21 PM

This is lovely.  The misspelling of 'petals' threw me at first, but when I got through that I just read it and sighed.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-04-07 07:47 PM

PrestonThePoet - enjoyed your writing...

BC
Wordplay
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since 2009-04-07
Posts 13
3 posted 2009-04-07 07:49 PM

Like a elegant glass of warm scotch.  Delightful and takes lifes edge off.  Kudos!
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