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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-03-26 03:57 PM



Quiet sky,
disturbing thoughts
match you.
Quiet sky
you share sun
with everyone,
golden hay
surprises sadness,
pipelines of love
cross anxiety.
Quiet sky
drift in my heart.

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Juju
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1 posted 2009-03-26 04:17 PM


Interesting


_juju

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
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2 posted 2009-03-26 04:19 PM


It's amazing what emotions the sky can pull from your mind and heart.
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3 posted 2009-03-29 01:08 AM


yann,

The quiet sky reminds me of your poems.  They are quiet to my senses, but make an impace upon me.

Alison

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-03-29 05:06 AM


quote:
Quiet sky,
disturbing thoughts
match you.
Quiet sky
you share sun
with everyone,
golden hay
surprises sadness,
pipelines of love
cross anxiety.
Quiet sky
drift in my heart.


Dear Yann, this speaks to me so strongly, this is wonderful poetry.

I will KEEP it to read it again, when I need to address a quiet sky.

Perfect!!

Love,
Margherita

Shadow Poet
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5 posted 2009-03-29 05:13 AM


Ah, such a wonderful thought. I loved the vivd imagery in which you painted through your expression. Looking forward to reading more.
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-03-29 09:25 AM


Oh, the calming, silent thoughts that can tumble from our mind ~ and down the page, when we look at a peaceful sky.

I enjoyed your quiet thoughts, Yann.

Love & Sky Light,

Linda

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7 posted 2009-03-29 11:32 AM


Love the sky ~ Love the poem!


ARCTIC WIND

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displaced
8 posted 2009-03-29 12:37 PM


golden hay

really I'm tired of seeing it now

but quiet skies will always be beautiful

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