Open Poetry #44 |
The Birdcage - written with Ink |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The Birdcage kitty-cornered on a single branch kindling amid last leaves catcalls and coo's in autumn's catch and pre-spring recitals swallows full of voice wrened and refrained a repertoire of avid dittys in full view of a world a blind madness barely twitching in full view they are nesting twigs of hope, blades of revival renaissanced, they are nesting for the whole world to see in birds eye, a full view paying homage to a blind world in a birdcage In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Anything about birds gets my attention and smile! I'm enjoying these duets you two are offering, especially with nature as a backdrop. Good to see you posting again, Craig. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
swallows full of voice wrened and refrained a repertoire of avid dittys in full view of a world a blind madness barely twitching ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You two are something else, I love the signs of Spring peeking through the maddness. It's always good to read you guys! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I went to copy favorite lines here, but dang! word for word, this is awesome |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, awesome is right! A keeper! Love, Margherita |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Truly a wonderful write. The collaboration flows seamlessly and the tone and visuals of this just really touched me. I loved this. Really well done both of you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice seamless |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading us we seem to be on a roll these days |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You can't tell where one begins and the other ends - well done! This is a pleasure to read. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"in full view they are nesting twigs of hope, blades of revival" Love it and am watching the same out my windows! nice to see you writing together M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goddess, I read in your reply that "we seem to be on a roll these days." I suppose that you and Craig are a couple of "Spring Rolls". Hmmm, Chinese, anyone? lol Please excuse my silliness ~ But it IS Spring, yanno! Another great collaboration! Keep 'em rolling! Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this poem you guys have written! ~ Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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