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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes in that afternoon jello sun when you have your eyes closed but open swallowing what you might have said if there weren't so many others around you mention you are a bad girl with rules but you know I would ignore them anyway and make you wish you hadn't told me then your nylons make that flirting sound and you cross your heart with your arms without even a chill for a reason then there is that smile place again like my eyes found something inside you that you didn't know you were wearing you always were way over dressed mostly for the kind of places we wished we were and for the kind of dancing we had in mind if there weren't so many others around _______________ daark (viscosity) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
feel like shimmying in your tub of jello mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm no matter how full the tummy, always room for jello, aint there  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and you cross your heart with your arms without even a chill for a reason then there is that smile place again like my eyes found something inside you ~*~ Exactly. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 mmmmm. They way I'd dance if there weren't so many around. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky..thanks babe..we would always make room. _______________ ms sun, thanks lady friend, you bless me _________________ ms nan, I can only imagine..darn them crowds, thanks lady!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you always were way over dressed mostly for the kind of places we wished we were and for the kind of dancing we had in mind if there weren't so many others around This reminds me of a few wonderful years... when the dancing moments were always in wishes... and the world was entirely too populated. *S* Loved this!!! *S* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"swallowing what you might have said if there weren't so many others around you mention you are a bad girl with rules but you know I would ignore them anyway" oh yes.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks for looking back through the windows babe!! _______________ ms suesea, a pleasure to see you nod..thanks babe |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
"sometimes in that afternoon jello sun when you have your eyes closed but open swallowing what you might have said if there weren't so many others around..................." This is very much enjoyed by me lol ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
A&W..thanks so much!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - wouldn't mind dancing with her myself, really felt this writing... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks bc...thanks loads guy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh, true involvement exists when the crowd is not perceived anymore or transforms into distant trees that watch in silence the lovers dance.  Captivating poetic performance! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! For some strange reason, my vestments just slipped off my shoulders! |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thank you for the share Dark Mesmerist Heather |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend _________________ ms EA..I sure love it when you were a vest..over imagination..thanks babe _______________ ms unboundpoetess, humble thanks to you |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
It makes me wish to be dancing with someone special and that feeling that the two of you are the only ones that exist - everything around is just a blur. Thanks for the wonderful words! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty1, a slow dance perhaps..very slow, thanks ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
psssst - I sucked the jello outta the sun. |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
i read it twice, and will certainly read it again! the pictures you create are magnetic, and your words, compelling. i love it! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS This recalls the dancers I watched in Ventura, one long ago. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe ____________ ks, thanks so much _____________ ms martie, thanks little neighbor |
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