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Twi
Junior Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 22
the Underworld

0 posted 2009-05-22 01:39 PM


The sky needs the moon,
Like I need you.
The sea needs the lakes,
Rivers and streams,
Just like you and I
Need dreams.
Love entraps you in its hold,
Or at least that's what I've been told.
But if our love is like a prison,
I'm in jail to stay.

§Bella§

© Copyright 2009 Bella - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-05-22 01:47 PM


Yo dear Bella,

You have the right attitude.  I like your poem.

Love Bobby

Rex
Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
2 posted 2009-05-23 11:29 AM


Very nicely done,enjoyed the read.

Regards.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-05-23 12:31 PM


"But if our love is like a prison,
I'm in jail to stay."

~ Now THAT's love! lol


EA

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2009-05-24 11:39 PM


I like the ideas you presented about the sea, and the sky, and our dreams.  
Very much enjoyed how you strung them all together.

Lovely writing, and welcome to the blue pages.

Twi
Junior Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 22
the Underworld
5 posted 2009-05-26 07:53 AM


Thank you for your alls comments.
I appreciate them alot.

§Bella§

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