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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Flowers budding, sharing delight sucking sunshine needy; birds in flight, swift and yearning fleeing Winter greedy, Spring. ©2009 by icebox . |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed the technical aspects of this poem as well as the descriptive qualities Icebox. Short and succinct and carries the message with a clear visual. Nicely done ... much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sucking sunshine...what a fine drink that is! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey icebox...I've got a straw! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My neighbor and I spent all last week pouting at her Amyrillis buds. And today it was such a lovely surprise-- a big joyous row of YAY!  Love ya iceman.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Into my faves library.  A wonderful write, m'friend. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Spring gathers the rain, breathes in the air and gives and takes in unforseen ways. It's a new beginning every year, and therein lies the promise of spring. So glad to read you here, it's been a while. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"fleeing Winter" sure wish I could fly, that's what I'd be doing fleeing winter....good grief... lol |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The Spring power overwhelms us. You said it ever so beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Yes, new life is lighting our world in flashing shimmers. Uplifting write! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Greedy spring" is sure giving me some beautiful flowers this year. Your poems are always just different enough, Mr. Ice. ida |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
spring is here |
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