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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 tender wandering thoughts sway in rhythm with each lull and crash inhale….exhale pulling emotions on glowing strands there, in moonlight pale these flights of fancy serenaded by organic melodies stranded in my soul left to echo….. redundancies ~reminders of you as if somehow I could forget the cadence of my own heartbeat~ tonight…..tonight, oh how the moonlight gleams once again I am surrendered to memories and will be lost to you in dreams… ~SEA~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awww, you got me with this! I'm homesick!  of course |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as if somehow I could forget the cadence of my own heartbeat~ tonight…..tonight, oh how the moonlight gleams once again I am surrendered to memories and will be lost to you in dreams… This is absolutely lovely... and loving. Every line follows the sea's rhythms so well I feel my toes should be wet... and the verse above is one of the most beautiful I've read in a long time... Into my library this goes! *S* |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
The lull and crash and the inhale and exhale....describes in perfect clarity along with the picture, how our memories keep washing ashore in our minds. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This speaks to me on so many levels, It is again one of your very best. I am in awe of your tallent, and inspired to be a better poet with each reading of your poems. So well done. Loved it, Thank you. Tracey. |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This poem touched me deeply. Thank you SEA. A chorus of agony from heaven and rain poured in a colossus of angel's tears. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
Ok, I'll be honest...it's beautiful. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Keeper keeper keeper! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully worded. Pic fits perfectly! Eric |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful words and pic |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
BEAUTIFUL PIC SEA!!!! ~ Excellent combo,  ARCTIC WIND |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much for your kind replies and smiles  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh you made that look SO easy! That was a beauty Sea. |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
This really touches my heart. You have a wonderful gift of putting into words. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
How romantic. I love the ocean tides. I never get to see them, but I love them anyway. Lovely picture, too, and entirely a complement to the poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you for your really nice replies, they mean a lot to me! |
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