Open Poetry #44 |
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Bones and Griselda Don't Mess Around |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Bones and his beautiful Griselda no longer mess about with flowers, holding hands, sweet-talk, and stuff like that. They know each other way too well for that. They get right down to the nitty-gritty. Bobby |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But those steps along the way make the nitty gritty even better. *S* |
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moonbeam![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
How poignant, how sad Bobby ![]() or ... (and this is what makes poetry so mmmm) |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I think they had such hard lives, things like flowers and holding hands have a stench of bitterness(not towards each other, but the world). -Juju |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
sad write, bobby, Bones seems to get lots of bad luck and have a sad journey, hopefully it will end better! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, Yes, that was always Griselda’s contention. She could never quite convince Bones. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Moonbeam, That's what makes poetry poetry, or mmmmmmmmmm. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, I know Griselda would have loved those things. However, Bones was always just too angry. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Artic Wind, Yes, perhaps. However, we do know that it will end the way it ends. Who knows. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yea for nitty gritty and the pleasure and relief it gives through that biological function. Goos one Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, I'm very happy you agree. There's nothing like the nitty gritty. Thanks for the kind words on the poem. Bobby |
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