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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-03-24 10:50 PM

Bohemian Mind Dance

Flowers sent in the perfume of spring
Lilt their fragrance on the night
Pithy speeches of sunset, so suddenly done
Velvet curtains drape darkness
Spinning incantations of magic
Flitter of sensibility,
You salsa the sky of my mind
Setting fire to the sunrise
Leaving the mist of desire upon me
In the watered mouth of morning
Traveled barefoot and lighthearted
Breezy waltz of the wind

Copyright Kkh 3/24/09

Raindance
Member

since 2009-02-07

Posts 120
West Coast

1 posted 2009-03-24 11:00 PM

ooh, spring has sprung,
in more ways than one!

I love this:
Leaving the mist of desire upon me
In the watered mouth of morning

Wild and Wonderful!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-03-25 12:12 PM

"You salsa the sky of my mind
Setting fire to the sunrise
Leaving the mist of desire upon me"

all of this is amazing, but I loved this part best

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-03-25 02:38 AM

Good one, Diamond. Lovely descriptions in this.
Ida

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-25 09:00 AM

You salsa the sky of my mind
Setting fire to the sunrise
Leaving the mist of desire upon me
In the watered mouth of morning

These lines in particular give me a serious case of poetic envy! LOL Beautiful work!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2009-03-25 02:57 PM

I always feel the dance in your poetry
with or without the accompaniment of the pre spring breezes

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-03-25 03:05 PM

So soft, so wonderful.
Your poems always breath romance effortlessly.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2009-03-25 04:00 PM

"You salsa the sky of my mind"
Tasty image...wish I had written that line!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2009-03-25 09:20 PM

Setting fire to the sunrise
Leaving the mist of desire upon me
In the watered mouth of morning
Traveled barefoot and lighthearted
Breezy waltz of the wind

Now, that's poetry. Much liked!

Eric

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2009-03-25 09:22 PM

i loveeeee all your poetry

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