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A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

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Open Poetry #44
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Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
0 posted 2009-03-20 07:02 PM



Our love is strong
like rock near a shore
Our love can stay
together forever
Endless
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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2009-03-20 07:07 PM

I like the meeting of those two forces that never change. This is a great illustrative example of true love never ending.

Good work!

Eric
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2009-03-21 12:00 PM

Dark Star - yes, love can be endless, and that's a good thing...

BC
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-03-22 05:07 PM

Enjoyed the Write


ARCTIC WIND
Dark Star
Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-03-22 05:09 PM

Thank you all
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