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Deepest of all Hearts
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Deepest of all Hearts |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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 Dear one who stands before me now I will not tell you not to cry, But rather catch your tender tears That one day they might be returned. Though I can feel the love you bear I cannot share your silver cup, Yet do not spill your ruby wine That one day lover's lips may share. Deepest of all hearts, ocean soul I am but dust and whisperings That you may snare within your palm and evaporate with the wind. Yet one day dust may make a man And one day whispers give a voice, Where lie the endless threads of fate? And where lies eternity's end? Do not drop your life so precious, Do not sever the woven thread, Deepest of all hearts, ocean soul I will not tell you not to cry. For one whose tears I shared and scoured my heart last night. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
just hold on, for fate, has a funny sense of humor sometimes....and just when you think you are heading down the right path...here it comes blowing in upon the wind to remind us...no..this way....this way... ~Warm hugs ~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-21-2009 05:28 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I will not tell you not to cry, But rather catch your tender tears" ~ The one whose tears you shared last night, is fortunate to have someone as loving and as caring as you to catch their tears. ~ a tender, compassionate write.  Linda |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Deepest of all hearts, ocean soul I am but dust and whisperings That you may snare within your palm and evaporate with the wind" this part here, caught me off guard... and touched my heart, directly. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Really liked the emotion of the whole piece but loved the ending. "Do not drop your life so precious, Do not sever the woven thread, Deepest of all hearts, ocean soul I will not tell you not to cry." Very nice indeed. Eric |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
The one who's read this knows who it's for. But again I thank you all for your support for my writing. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - a great write of feelings and what they mean. This is a very good write... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 To all who have read this poem, Luke has written it for me, and I can now say thank you Luke for being so sweet to do so, your words of comfort, and your poem for me, shows your compassionate heart, there is no greater gift to me, than words of poetry written from the heart, and for this, you have my humble gratitude... with all my heart, I thank you! ~Warm Hugs ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-21-2009 06:42 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Deepest of all hearts, ocean soul I am but dust and whisperings That you may snare within your palm and evaporate with the wind. Yet one day dust may make a man And one day whispers give a voice, Where lie the endless threads of fate? And where lies eternity's end? So very lovely and heart-touching!! |
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