Open Poetry #44 |
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The Poet and The Dreamer. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
She read once again, his soft words; and she wondered were these just words crafted? Or heart-thoughts, so bright? Were they whispered for her, as her dreaming, he plundered, and stole her heart, soft, as a thief in the night. For each serene rhyming, soft, gently caressing the female heart; whispering, how sweet, love should be, perhaps, were just words, gentle laid for the guessing, were they sweet truths? Or just, wistful whimsy? But, she could not know such love he had once called his own, was now, but pale shadow of what had once been; the sweet words he rhymed had no home; wandered all alone; love had turned her smile away from his dream. And thus, as she wondered; soft cloaked there, before her, lay truth in the whispers; perhaps, she would see she need, but reach out with her heart, to soft capture the dream she shared with him, and bring it to be. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there you go again ![]() *sighs* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bring it to be....in romantic whispers and words typed across blue pages, into a blue heart, turning red.. ~ARH I enjoy those whispers....so soft.... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write WH! ~ Nicely Penned ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This strikes a real chord in me. It calls to mind the poetry I write for my beloved. Nice write my friend. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
FINE Romanticism! applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Indeed! Ida |
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She read once again, his soft words; and she wondered were these just words crafted? Or heart-thoughts, so bright? Were they whispered for her, as her dreaming, he plundered, and stole her heart, soft, as a thief in the night. I love the whole poem, but especially this verse... Beautiful write!! |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
Loved the first strophe. I hope "she" thinks that when I write for her. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And thus, as she wondered; soft cloaked there, before her, lay truth in the whispers; perhaps, she would see she need, but reach out with her heart, to soft capture the dream she shared with him, and bring it to be. A touching poem my friend, so much enjoyed. top accolades for this well penned poem. Lindsay |
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