Open Poetry #44 |
Gifts of Sol |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Shafts of warm amber sunlight stream softly past curtains pulled to welcome the morning. Potted plants on the windowsill awaken, stretch to greet the day. A spirited song sparrow serenade surrounds the neighborhood with emphemeral sounds only nature bestows upon anxious listeners. It is spring. The world still spins, graciously bathes each soul in the eternal gifts of Sol. Immerse your senses, cherish the moment. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Kacy, Indeed it is the first day of Spring. I hope everyone is up for it. Here in the hood we're sure to be. We do have potted plants here, we're ready. Love Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Though the thermometer was reading 28F, the sun was beginning to warm the windows by 8 AM. Happy spring, Bobby. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ahhhh, lovely, Kacy! We, here, are sliding into Autumn, but our Winters are so much gentler than yours. I enjoyed basking in your poem so much and I can imagine what it must do for those still dragging their feet through the remnants of Winter! Not only is it the Springtime of the seasons - but also the Springtime of your recovery - and this poem is a delicately magnificent celebration of both! I love your poem for all of the possible reasons! Your muse is doing you proud! Thank you for sharing your happiness with us! Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I especially love the ending: "warm amber sunlight... nature bestows... ...the eternal gifts of Sol. Immerse your senses, cherish the moment." applause for this seasonal 'penning' that so effectively "Springs" to the occasion! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loverly Kacy - something tells me our Spring is going to take awhile here |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Beautiful! You describe our nice balmy weather here in Florida. We had a bad winter for us. This yard is all down and we are now cutting out the dead branches of most of the bushes. Some are just gone. I have never seen all the plantings so sorry as this year. I have been here for twenty years now. Connecticut was cold and we got spoiled here. But I won't complain becaue I did not have to shovel snow since I left Ct. Thank you, late |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Owlie, it's still cold here at night. Have a great autumn! Bruce, glad you enjoyed! Sharon, it's till below freezing temps at night here too. Late, bedragled bushes, eh? LOL. Hope you have a good year, without too much wild weather. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh how I love the sounds and smells those images bring to my mind. Well done Kacy! Eric |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Shafts of warm amber sunlight stream softly past curtains pulled to welcome the morning. Potted plants on the windowsill awaken, stretch to greet the day............." I will surely cherish the moment you captured here Midnitesun! ~ Just beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, I'm happy this gave you a moment of pleasure. AW, this morning really unfolded just like this. Thanks for letting me share it with you. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Kacy, what a beautiful season of the year is Spring, it always gives you a lift in your spirits and you have painted a beautiful picture in words here. I loved it. Love to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Kacy for sharing this beautiful and well written piece. Spring is here again in our hearts. regards yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I really like this one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hopefully the sun will hold its own today and the warmth will energize the day, here. M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for letting me share theses Sol gifts with you. It is still below freezing temps at night, but at least the sun shows its face each AM, and happy birds are singing Spring from treetops and telephone lines every morning now. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
O Sole Mio... Kacy the Gracious, you Light up these pages with your solar soul songs. This one is beyond beautiful ~ as are they all! May the sun kiss you every morning ~ and the moon, every night. Linda |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy..."Cherish the moment" So many gifts in a moment go unnoticed...thank you for this reminder. Your poem reminded me of a song from long ago called Mocking Bird Hill. You're probably too young to remember it, but I enjoyed the thoughts of it, reminded by your pen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The world still spins, My morning needed this reminder... and found it wrapped in your beautiful words. *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Linda, hugs to you! Martie? I do remember that one, sung by Patti Page! "Tra-la-la, twiddly-dee-dee It gives me a thrill To wake up in the morning to the mockingbird's trill Tra-la-la, twiddly-dee-dee There's peace and goodwill You're welcome as the flowers on Mockin' Bird Hill When the sun in the morning Peeps over the hill, And kisses the roses 'round my windowsill Then my heart fills with gladness When I hear the trill Of the birds in the treetops on Mockin' Bird Hill" Thank you, Suthern, for your comment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
after this winter's ice storm, you bet I am cherishing the moment! blissful write |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
That's the one! Then there's Sparrow in the Tree Top. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Yep, Midnitesun, we should never forget to "cherish the moment." I've enjoyed the read. Mark |
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Boshii2 Member
since 2009-02-01
Posts 146 |
that was good...made me think of my own neglected potted plants stretching for the sun and probably a drink. ..just getting lost in Tomer's "Infinite",relaxing on board his flight and checking the talent in the seats around .Best go do the housework..... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
If ya don't mind, I think I am gonna save this one Kacy! ~ Excellent again the second time ~ ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dixie, thanks for the read and comment! Enjoy your springtime. Martie, Sparrows are so cool! Marc Andre, thank for stopping by my windowsill. Boshi, LOL, give those window babies some water! Smiling at you AW. Thank you for that reply! |
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