Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Is No Longer Bothered |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
It used to bother Bones, when people talked about his father being locked up and all. Yes, it used to bother him a lot. He would visit Dad, and Dad was always glad, more than glad, to see him. That made things all better. When Bones Dad passed away that made that problem disappear. Then all Bones was left with was a yearning for the man he never really got to know. Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
enjoyed bones grows |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Serenity blaze, Yes, Bones is growing up. Thanks for reading, and your kind comment. Love Bobby |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Losing one problem often begets another. *S* Well done, Bobby!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, Yes, that seems to be the way it works. Thanks for your kind words on this little poem. Love Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That happens and it's so unfair but then Bones knows all too well how unfair this life can be sometimes. The things Bones needs the most he keeps losing yet he holds on to survive....He's one of my favorite people. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, Yes, life is unfair. Father was a war hero. He spent over half his life locked up, and died there. I was there for him while he died. I'm glad I was there, with my oldest daughter. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm glad the poem worked for you. Bobby |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
That's a sad piece, Bobby. A deeply touching writ. Mark |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Mark, Well that's the way life goes. It's always part sad, but only part. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, For your sad. Love Bobby |
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