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Our Stand |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
By saying that I love you I'm not filled with dismay By saying that I love you A perfect mistake is made By having a most human conversation We attain the sought-for freedom richer than the wealth of nations, greater than the might of kingdoms By laying beneath the stars on the grass , holding hands We know how small we are We know, that, in love, we stand Note: this was one of my very first attempts so it might need some work. I will gratefully read all critiques. [This message has been edited by Fizzle (03-22-2009 10:07 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I loved all of this, but this "By laying beneath the stars on the grass , holding hands We know how small we are We know, that, in love, we stand" was really wonderful  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This one is my favorite of yours...keep writing...~ARH |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely write indeed! ~ Enjoyed deeply~ ARCTIC WIND |
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