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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2009-03-18 01:46 PM

Is it you? Speak to Me…...

Oh my poetic visionary, my lover extraordinaire
could I be your desired one, would I even compare
to those you've treasured and lusted in your life so long ago
or would you rather me, here, now, not even begin to know?

Tho I cannot give you my all, nor my universe,
but my entire being for all of its temporal worth,
for when I grasp your pledge of giving and of love
I feel as if I've been newly born and thereby lustily birthed.

You've laid bare all my senses, I feel as if you're the sun
by entering my private areas, those I've kept for just The One.
Is it you? Is it you? Are my dreams encircled in your speech
of poetry and prose and rhymes that for me beseech?

Not looking for this stirring, your words have left me reeling,
I hesitate to clarify for my knees they have gone weak.
Is it you? Could it be? Are you the one that to me have brought
your mortal love that I did not know I've sought … is it you?

Or are you then but a dream that I've webbed so fine
and are your words then spirits whispering through the pines
as I lay here 'neath nature's window, alone but not despaired
for at least your words have whispered that which I would share.

13 August, 1999
©KRJ
revised 11 September 2000

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-03-18 01:50 PM

'lustily birthed'
That's pretty hot, sunshine.

An old one I see, from your vault.
Such longing here. I think you speak to us.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-03-18 02:24 PM

No...'Tis not I...

But 'tis a lovely and plaintively-expressed yearning, all the same! lol

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

3 posted 2009-03-19 02:24 PM

I like this one a lot, celestial one... especially the last 2 lines! *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2009-03-19 02:49 PM

I can just see you, spellbound and dreamy, closing your eyes and living the dream.

This is deeply romantic and beautifully written, dear Karilea!

Love,
Margherita

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

5 posted 2009-03-21 11:52 AM

nice read

Martie

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California

6 posted 2009-03-22 02:06 PM

Sissie...caught again, like Yesterday's Love.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-03-22 02:41 PM

Enjoyed this penning Sunshine! ~

ARCTIC WIND

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

8 posted 2009-03-22 10:42 PM

Exquisite...just like you.

Life isn't about how to survive the storm...
But how to dance in the rain.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2009-03-24 07:03 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2009-03-24 08:08 PM

Sunshine - I really don't know what to say about this writing, it's just tempting, my word just tempting...

BC

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

11 posted 2009-03-24 09:45 PM

A very romantic poem dear Karilea and I

hope your dream comes true. Love to you
my friend.

Lindsay

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