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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-03-21 10:40 AM

Just Another Night

Its through my pen
My heart often yearns
In longings written
As another page turns

Here writing again
Became obvious why
I was reaching out
This was not goodbye

My heart searching
In need of some clues
The ending I seek
To my lonesome blues

I gaze a blank page
In which I ponder upon
Just another night
Still missing someone

Hope ©2009

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

1 posted 2009-03-21 11:13 AM

This is a nice wistful piece of writing. However the lines

I gaze a blank page
In which I ponder upon

need a bit of work as the writing here is a little careless. Overall however there is a nice feel to the poem.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-03-21 11:37 AM

Hope, always you write my heart. I'm sorry you know this, but in a way, glad I'm not alone.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2009-03-21 11:54 AM

nice

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2009-03-22 02:32 PM

Enjoyed this Write Hope!

ARCTIC WIND

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-03-23 08:16 AM

Your last verse describes most of my evenings. *S* Achingly beautiful!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2009-03-23 08:56 AM

High, Hope!

The hurt, the missing, the longing ~ and that formidable "blank page"!

However, m'dear, your pen covers that page with poetic grace.

Love 'n a warm hug,
Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2009-03-23 10:19 AM

those pages of blanks
crying out to be filled
as you have so skillfully

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-03-23 04:06 PM

Just another night missing someone...

Loved that. And I find I write my best in these conditions at night.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2009-03-23 06:13 PM

HopeS - I felt a sense of loss when reading this writing. Wish you well...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2009-03-23 06:32 PM

Nice writing...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

11 posted 2009-03-24 09:53 PM

A rather sad poem dear Hope but well penned

just the same. I hope the sun shines for you soon. Love.

Lindsay

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