Open Poetry #44 |
I Love You Like (repost for my sweetheart) |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love you like I love memories of the peaceful times. Like sunny days and lemonade and secret gifts that Grandma gave, cotton candy and ferris wheels and time alone when dreams seem real. I love you like I love morning dew on fields of grain and dawning sun through window panes, cool clear lakes and boating trips and mother's special Sunday dish. I love you like I love the delicate taste of the finest wine. Like the laughing thrill of bumper cars and sleeping out beneath the stars, singing songs on New Years eve and listening to the roaring sea. I love you like I love walking in a misty rain and the lonely call of a distant train, the warming rush of London Gin and the fire's glow when we're snowed in. I love you like I love the mystic call of a morning Loon. Like thoughts that slip through winds that moan and fire flies that chirp and glow, roosters posed on weathervanes and Autumn leaves on country lanes. I love you like I love family days at county fairs and circus clowns with crazy hair, budding trees in early spring and the bubbling talk of a mountain stream. But most of all, I love you for the quiet way you steal my day and the love we share I can't explain. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Just lovely, dear Eric. It means she is really part of everything and makes everything special. A beautiful song for your sweetheart. Love, Margherita |
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EvanescenceShy New Member
since 2009-03-01
Posts 8 |
LOVED that beautiful poem. She is very fortunate to have someone like you-sure hope my husband is this appreciative. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Eric, Nice words Babe. I'm sure she will like it a lot. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Eric my response on your poem 'whatever happened' is what I meant to put on this great poem, you wrote it well my friend. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A beautiful write! ~ Enjoyed deeply ARCTIC WIND |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Margherita Yes, she is a part of everything. I thank you for the visit and the comments I appreciate them very much. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
EvanescenceShy I'm sure he is that appreciative. Thanks you for stopping by to read this and the kind words. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Bobby Thanks for the kind words and yes, she does appreciate the poem a lot. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lindsay Thank you for those kind thoughts on both poems. I appreciate the visit and the read. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Artic Wind Glad you enjoyed this deeply. Thanks for the read and the visit. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, my friend! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"But most of all, I love you for the quiet way you steal my day and the love we share I can't explain." Oh, but Eric, I think you have done a loverly job of explaining! Continued blessings of love to you and your fortunate sweetheart! To love and more loving! Linda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Ruth Thanks for the B word and I appreciate the visit as always. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Linda Thanks so much for the kind words and I have tried to explain it as well as I can. I always appreciate your enthusiastic visits. Love ya dearly. Eric |
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