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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-03-18 12:04 PM


In twilight where the veil between worlds is lifted
We will find ourselves finally together
When time and space find themselves shifted
The line between real and unreal severed
There within the shadows we’ll be
A world for only you and me

Give in to the gentle gloaming call
As it descends unto us this night
A gift of immortal time when lovers fall
Before eyes of those for them shining bright
Hands clasp and lips graze the skin
Of another as the darkness begins

We are all these things as the colors run
The hour of true passion presses near
Sacred union of two lost souls now undone
Closer now as bodies touch without fear
The desires, before dimmed, now alight
Wants are fulfilled with us in twilight


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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1 posted 2009-03-18 12:07 PM


"In twilight where the veil between worlds is lifted" Lovely writing, Chalmette Guy.
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with you
2 posted 2009-03-18 12:11 PM


"We are all these things as the colors run
The hour of true passion presses near
Sacred union of two lost souls now undone
Closer now as bodies touch without fear
The desires, before dimmed, now alight
Wants are fulfilled with us in twilight"

this is really beautiful

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-03-18 12:25 PM


Loving as it is meant to be.

Loverly!


EA

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
4 posted 2009-03-18 12:47 PM


CG..enjoyed the romantica here, KEWL
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
5 posted 2009-03-18 01:06 PM


Thank you guys.
I know they are silly little poems and not technically any good.
If you like them, great.
But, I still would be writing them anyway.
I really appreciate you reading them regardless.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2009-03-18 01:32 PM


Ummm...I've written a few veiled poems myself...

this is lovely, and a



A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2009-03-18 07:08 PM


In Twilight is where I like to be,
not "silly" at all.....I  enjoy your musings!
they are who you are....from the heart, silliness is good sometimes...especially when you get silly together!

~ARH

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
8 posted 2009-03-18 09:05 PM


Enjoyed your wonderfully penned write!


ARCTIC WIND

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