Open Poetry #44 |
In Twilight |
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
In twilight where the veil between worlds is lifted We will find ourselves finally together When time and space find themselves shifted The line between real and unreal severed There within the shadows we’ll be A world for only you and me Give in to the gentle gloaming call As it descends unto us this night A gift of immortal time when lovers fall Before eyes of those for them shining bright Hands clasp and lips graze the skin Of another as the darkness begins We are all these things as the colors run The hour of true passion presses near Sacred union of two lost souls now undone Closer now as bodies touch without fear The desires, before dimmed, now alight Wants are fulfilled with us in twilight |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"In twilight where the veil between worlds is lifted" Lovely writing, Chalmette Guy. Ida |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"We are all these things as the colors run The hour of true passion presses near Sacred union of two lost souls now undone Closer now as bodies touch without fear The desires, before dimmed, now alight Wants are fulfilled with us in twilight" this is really beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loving as it is meant to be. Loverly! EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG..enjoyed the romantica here, KEWL |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you guys. I know they are silly little poems and not technically any good. If you like them, great. But, I still would be writing them anyway. I really appreciate you reading them regardless. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ummm...I've written a few veiled poems myself... this is lovely, and a |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
In Twilight is where I like to be, not "silly" at all.....I enjoy your musings! they are who you are....from the heart, silliness is good sometimes...especially when you get silly together! ~ARH |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your wonderfully penned write! ARCTIC WIND |
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