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Margherita
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0 posted 2009-03-13 08:49 PM




* * *

Even through failures

souls maintain divine wholeness

rooted in God’s love


* * *

© Copyright 2009 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-03-13 08:59 PM


Beautiful.  

This partners well with the poem of Bobby's that we both just responded to.  I know Bones is watched over.

A

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2 posted 2009-03-13 09:04 PM


Margherita, What a beautiful poem and picture to match,  Sometimes, the most simplest thoughts are the most powerful,

Very Nice,

W.Tracey B.

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-03-13 09:30 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is a lovely and truly named senryu.  It's a nice picture too.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-03-13 09:31 PM


Margherita - I'm touched by your writing...

BC

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5 posted 2009-03-14 01:20 AM


Stunning graphic! Soul-touching senryu!


Linda Angelo Terrestre

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6 posted 2009-03-14 12:44 PM


now THIS is just what I needed today!

Thank you!

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7 posted 2009-03-14 07:03 PM


This is beautiful Margherita.

A lovely graphic and inspirational words to match.

I'm a a commited lover of the senryu form and this one excels.

With love, Luke.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

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8 posted 2009-03-14 11:00 PM


What a lovely presentation... picture and poem! *s*
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9 posted 2009-03-15 09:12 PM


There is so much I admire about your sweet spirit.
Your writing is simply lovely, Margherita~

Margherita
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10 posted 2009-03-16 10:37 AM


Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, you are all so kind!

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2009-03-17 02:37 PM


Beautiful picture and words, Margherita.  My thinking son and I were talking about "failure" the other day and we both came to the conclusion that there's beauty in failure.  It opens the door to bigger and better - if we don't weaken, of course.  However, I reckon there's no such thing as failure on a soul level - just an experience perhaps.  

Hugs
Helen

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12 posted 2009-03-17 02:44 PM


Nicely done, great picture.

Eric

Margherita
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13 posted 2009-03-18 06:42 PM


Thank you dear Helen and dear Eric for the kindness of reading and commenting so lovingly.

Love,
Margherita

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14 posted 2009-03-18 07:10 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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15 posted 2009-03-18 09:10 PM


THIS IS BEAUTIFUL MARGHERITA!
Lovely


ARCTIC WIND

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16 posted 2009-03-19 06:06 AM


It's through the failures that one hopes to learn~~
Nicely done, Margherita

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17 posted 2009-03-19 12:28 PM


beautiful Margherita, thanks for sharing.

yann

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18 posted 2009-03-19 01:54 PM


Thank you dear James, dear Michael, dear Maureen and dear Yann for your loving replies.

Love,
Margherita

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19 posted 2009-03-21 11:19 PM


This is true form of emotion and blended nature.
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