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An Empire of Sympathy
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An Empire of Sympathy |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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All the poisoned waters of love And tears are no replacement, Out of reach and sight, Alone amidst an empire, An empire of sympathy For all that I am Yet all that you are Lies cold in a marble sheath. Out of reach, out of sight |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Heartfelt, sincere and compassionate, is what I feel, reading your words... my heart hurts, when others I care about are hurting too! I am here and I have left my words for you to offer some comfort as well...  Love, Millette |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"And tears are no replacement, Out of reach and sight," Your poem definitely has a cold feel to it. M |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
good 'penning' pursuant to faded love! interesting choice of "P.I.P." UserName as well ! applause for this succinct 'write' !! |
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