Open Poetry #44 |
Shadow and Light |
Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Like the interplay of colors Dancing to their very own tune We complement each other As stars unto the moon Only one who knows my mind Yet there are things yet unknown Things which remain held close Things which should be shown We skirt wonderfully around the issue Of always and what might have been Instead of embracing the distance And differences of each other’s whim Allowing us to propel to another place Another level of unbridled intensity Where the seasons come and go But there instead we will always be Give in to the different shades of love Such as different hues between day and night I am waiting in patient awe of you I am the shadow and you are my light |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
ooo...I loved the last line...I am the shadow and you are my night! very well done! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is akin to a whisper of silk, PK. Enjoyed this very much! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such as different hues between day and night Like it! Bravo The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Give in to the different shades of love Such as different hues between day and night I am waiting in patient awe of you I am the shadow and you are my light Romantic and lovely... wonderful write!! |
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