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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 he didn’t want to hear how I loved him didn’t want to know he was the poetry in my heart but it was there… and I bled my devotion unspoken a token, in ink~ but paper can burn and memories can fade (can’t they?) still… hearts can be broken in the silence in between no, I was never his.... ~*~ oh but I always was always will be his. ~SEA~ |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Like I've said before; It takes a lady to write a REAL love poem... I rest my case. Beautifully executed, and as gentle as an Angel's sigh. D. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Clever the way you create the thought pattern in this Sea. The ambivalence of the heart when it comes to love. It's very hard to handle because of many many complications of the treacherous emotional effects. Ain't never gonna change though is it? (smile) Nice writing indeed. Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A touching post dear Sea and a lovely memory. love to you my friend. Lindsay |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Susan, This is very beautiful, on so many levels: heart warming, to sad. You are very good at expressing your fealings, You truely have a gift. Well done, Hugs, Tracey |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Excellent blending of the realities of...who is who's (or whom's) when it comes to matters of the heart. And I dig your pictures that go with your poems. Cool stuff. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Simply LOVEly  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..he is blessed, enjoyed it |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, SEA, this is truly a loverly poem of love. I especially enjoyed the following lines ~ ~ "he was the poetry in my heart" ~ "a token, in ink~ but paper can burn and memories can fade"  Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I bled my devotion unspoken a token" I love the way this tumbles into your psyche...a very lovely write... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nobody wears their heart on their sleeve like you do. I love this, SEA~ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I know those feelings and every word of this touches my heart Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! memories can fade indeed, unless you take time out of each day to keep them fresh...I hardly ever forget things |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yes, memories fade. Disappear entirely, sometimes. I love your poetry. You say enough to evoke the emotion, and don't belabor it. Perfect picture to go with it too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you write with much heart, and the romantic that you are... BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very very much, your replies are so nice!  Hope, you write my heart continually! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was never his.... ~*~ oh but I always was always will be his. How well I know this feeling... how beautifully you've given it words!! |
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