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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-03-12 11:49 AM


Nightfall brings my muse
As I lay me down to rest
Fearing to tell her how much I need
Her whom knows me best

I, spellbound within the want
And she in vulnerable wait
Anxious for my return to her
Hope this does not come too late

The sacred thoughts in my mind
Are on the verge of lips to speak
Only for her ears to catch
In fear though, that she may flee

Before the moment of magic wanes
I furiously write of my desirous need
Of her whom I now confess
Of her whom I only can feel

Here I live within the timeless hope
For the one day she might share
Words of want and need to me
Giving somehow of her heart to bear


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-12 12:42 PM


My muse is Merry the Fairy! She often helps me write my love poems. She knows what's in my heart ~ better than I do! ~ and she knows how to express it!

She comes to me in the night, as well. I always have pen and paper next to my bed so that when she starts spouting those 'purdy' words, I will be able to write them down!

I enjoyed this collaboration between you and your muse!


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with you
2 posted 2009-03-12 07:16 PM


are you ready for it?? here it comes....

*SIGHS*

ahhhhhhhhha I'm so glad you are back. There is no way to pick a favorite line here...

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2009-03-13 05:15 PM


I am so happy that love exists, it does inspire some of the most beautiful poetry, that is pleasing to the ears and the heart...

tingle....tingle...


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4 posted 2009-03-14 10:24 PM


You've blended hope and pain into a circle, where cooexistence is the norm... which is an apt image of both love and writing. *S*

If nightfall brings your muse I'll welcome evening... for your work is incredibly beautiful!

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