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Red Veil |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Red veil I watch you gaze at me as your eyes turn dark Just enough to swallow All the light in the room I almost can see gaps Where you had slipped away Just enough to leave you Still hungry and empty I want to clear my mind Of who had shot you down And who's face now reflects Onto my silhouette Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (03-13-2009 12:52 AM).] |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I am a big believer in the power of seeing someone's soul within their eyes. "as your eyes turn dark Just enough to swallow All the light in the room" Killer lines that really mean a lot to me. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome poem!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"as your eyes turn dark just enough to swallow all the light in the room." Love this part of a very good poem, Juju. Ida |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Juju, You're really very good. It's another one I'd like to, with your permission, add to my Word File of poems by others. John . |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
This says many words to me |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you every one, and John you can add this one to your list. Juju -Juju |
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