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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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do I want the words and the favor of flavors when you let your kiss go deep and let the animal of your woman prowl me do I want your charms just as they are with the lights on and the windows open with my eyes filled to the overflowing do I want your love that extra love you have hidden that weeps from your soul and stains the sleeves of my mind yes, I want it all, abandoned for my taking ________________ daark (forbidden) |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I understand this - and you express the feeling (and longings) so beautifully. A |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You have to want it all to get anything more than a temporary distraction. *S* I love this... from title through last word. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe _______________ ms suthern, thanks to you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How beautifully you express this, Poet! Sounds like you have made up your mind. Abandoned abandon! Love without restraints... perfectly rendered. Love, Margherita |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
an anchor detached she's pulled, his whirlpool musings baptismal deluge. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ____________ ms indi.. being glib she ribbed with tongue in cheek and mischief in eye from her fenced perch of proper protection though hemmed to appeal but not to allow revealing burma shave? [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-11-2009 08:05 AM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"do I want your love that extra love you have hidden that weeps from your soul and stains the sleeves of my mind" ...now this is cool... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks guy! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strong wants... with deep vibrations. Good stuff, this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..thanks babe |
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