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Open Poetry #44
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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2009-03-09 07:53 PM


darkness shall erase the sun,
the sun shall shine through the bind.
the sun shall rise to show the day,
how to shine the darkness away.


^_^ found it, this is my first poem
once again hope ya'll like it
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2009-03-09 08:43 PM

Just so!

We are aware of darkness because of the light and of light because of the darkness.

You express this nicely.

Love,
Margherita


abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
Posts 45
2 posted 2009-03-10 09:03 AM

^_^ thanks and since i'm too lazy to post twice double thanks from my other poem. ^_____^
i'm glad you agree.
ty Margherita.
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