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abhursty
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since 2009-02-25
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0 posted 2009-03-09 07:50 PM



oh how i wish i could see the stars,
oh how i wish they would shine through their bright bars.
oh how i wish they would shine with all their might,
oh how i wish i could see them at night.


another random poem XD. the only reason i wrote this one was cus i hate the fact if you live in the city all the lights kinda "erase" the stars. i hope ya'll like it ^_^


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2009-03-09 08:38 PM


I agree!
In our light polluted cities we can spot only the very brightest ones ...
Oh, to see the milky way in all its splendor every night!

Lovely longing!

Love,
Margherita

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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2 posted 2009-03-11 03:16 PM


I know what you mean...I recently moved to a more rural area and all of a sudden, wow....there are stars at night?
I almost didn't know that.

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3 posted 2009-03-14 07:48 PM


I've been driving down the highway at night... and had to literally pull over to the side of the road because out of the cities, the stars put on such a show. *S*

I like this... thanks for the memory! *S*

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