Brunette's Window - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #44

Brunette's Window

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2009-03-11 03:57 PM

She turned away;
the cut of her hair
facing the brown terrace.

Her brown, sand hands
Sat alongside one another;
draped around the rain
that slid off of her cheeks,
scathing her lips,
and wetting the bottom half of her grey, wool sweater.

Her jeans; buttoned at top,
cut at the boot.
Stood firm, accenting her hips and legs,
like her eyes that caramelized the evening's pink skyline.

And with her stare,
alongside the silence of her hair,
she looked through her window.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-03-11 04:20 PM

Leaves me wanting to know what happens next.

Which, I feel is the mark of good writing.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-03-14 07:50 PM

I like this snapshot of time you've given! *S*

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.