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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-03-09 07:24 PM


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Man with woman—

However inhuman
That match might be


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-03-09 08:02 PM


Yo John,

Man with woman is what makes humanity happen.

Bobby

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-03-10 10:39 AM


Hi John, I like biodiversity.

smiles

yann

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3 posted 2009-03-10 08:05 PM


John, did you mean inhumane as opposed to inhuman?
steavenr
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4 posted 2009-03-11 10:19 AM


glad I read this while alone so I wouldn't have to explain why I was laughing so hard...may not have been your intention, but I certainly found it entertaining
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2009-03-11 11:08 AM


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Thanks all

Yes Steve,
that was my intention;
wrote it for a little busy body.

John

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Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2009-03-13 11:33 AM


Enjoyed all the implications.  (Well, all the ones I saw)

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

HelmutB
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7 posted 2009-03-13 05:33 PM


Nice short and to the point. Loved it.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


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