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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 This was a good day to court layers, not only for their nature of colors and shifting shapes but asking the why of their cause for giving eyes reasons to see beyond… the day lent to moments where, when the sun was just right it streamed through the fog of mind streaming through trees, casting spells, paralleling prismatic patinas, hues hugging horizontally, as they do, without fail without question… and I wanted to grasp the quality of floating gems, for you, but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light this was the day I saw funnels of fog light dance on a river ~ several hundred small funnels of spirit matter attempting to draw loose from the water, to float upwards, to beyond rooting in me a thought to think of times not now, not here, but of then, and there, as ever was, so I did what I do, in an attempt at understanding, and looked for a sign… when I saw him… so high above, looking strangely ancient, on his way toward the light, to a doorway beyond where understanding is held on a higher realm, there, on a plane that calls out to those who listen even through the cacophony even when they cannot believe that they, too, can lift layers to see just a little more…  (c) 2003 |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Lovely. It made me remember some of the more spectacular things I've seen ordinary nature do. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi ya sunny. A very feminine write for me. You lose me a little in spots, but I agree  Just a minute............Gotta get the fuzz out of my navel Gosh.....There might be more layers under those layers....... Then what would I do...... Are your layers the same as my layers?....... Wait a minute.......I think I see more fuzz..... Yes those layers are hard lessons learned turtle  [This message has been edited by turtle (03-04-2009 09:07 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Like you, I can't easily dismiss what I know I don't understand. (Learned that one the hard way, too.) I am still learning it, daily. much enjoyed lovie, and I don't mind the feminine p.o.v. But then, of course I wouldn't.  nice work here...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
There's layers of good lines in this with great perspective for searching out. You're a good writer my dear. Always have been always will be. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light" ~ but it is a poet like yourself who is able to capture those moments for eternity.  Love & Light, Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is the Sunshine magic. I love to watch the clouds and capture images too. Very beautiful, dear Karilea! Love, Margherita |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"this was the day I saw funnels of fog light dance on a river ~ several hundred small funnels of spirit matter attempting to draw loose from the water, to float upwards, to beyond rooting in me a thought to think of times not now, not here, but of then, and there, as ever was" I bolded my favorite of my favorite part... cause that is really what it looks like to me too!!loved this |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A true beauty from the heart of a poet ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
The beauty - well it just wraps around me and lingers even now as I write my response. Some poems reach inside me as if taking hold to stay for awhile. This is one such poem. It is welcome to reside in me for as long as it wants to stay. Alison |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it so much  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine imagery and 'food for thought'! MUCH sustained applause!! |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
This is such a swirl of emotions, it literally transcends across the heavens and lifts the reader up.. because in truth, we all share the same sky, the same ray of sunshine if you will. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I wanted to grasp the quality of floating gems, for you, but beauty is fleeting and all things mysterious fade into light I'm loving every layer of this! *S* |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
beyond where understanding is held on a higher realm, there, on a plane that calls out to those who listen even through the cacophony even when they cannot believe that they, too, can lift layers to see just a little more… Top accolades for this one dear Karilea, You penned it well. Love Lindsay |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I had to come back and reread this one. So very nicely conceived and executed. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Boy oh Boy........so nice. ehm should have said Girl, I guess. "paralleling prismatic patinas," I can feel this as an artist, with very letter in the stroke of my brush. Very insperational, thank you for painting with words. Luv it. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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