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Open Poetry #44

Let the sun sleep in

impact
Junior Member

since 2009-03-07

Posts 27

0 posted 2009-03-09 02:11 PM

Upon first formal introductions
Why must perfection be present
A perfect circle can only be that

Some ideals are best kept locked away
You can run some test later on
One should not sit idly on an image

Lists could be written of reasons why not to
Such lists are created continually throughout our days
What if we threw them all away

Let us remember each other in moments of gold
Pay less attention to every dark detail
Let the sun sleep in

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2009-03-09 02:14 PM

Hi Impact, I love this one cause it talks about the essential...We people are not numbers, we have feelings that we would so much like to share...I love the intimacy and beauty of your poem.

yann

impact
Junior Member

since 2009-03-07

Posts 27

2 posted 2009-03-09 06:34 PM

thank you very much yann!

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