Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Is A Little Bitter |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Twelve year old Bones gets taken down for prostitution. The judge doesn’t give him much of a chance to present a case, so he pleads guilty. The state sends him off to a camp that’s going to show him the right way to behave. They give him a hoe, and a bundle of pine tree shoots to plant on a rich guy’s property. The rich guy gets this work for free. Bones pinches off the roots before he plants them. Those pine trees aren’t going anywhere. Bones is a little bitter. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
At tweleve years old I can't say as I blame him for being a little bitter. However, having the insight into that sort of pay back at that age is evidence of his growing up way too fast because of circumstances. I admire Bones. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, For your kind words on Bones. You've nailed his thought pattern exactly. Bones always was a good thinker. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Yo Bobby I like the way you write and describe society and its flaws, always interesting. regards yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Bones and I are anxiously awaiting the next wave of world-wide social upheaval. We’re going to make things better. Man the barricades! Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - Bones sure knows how to plant them trees on the rich guys property, good for him... BC |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Bones has more right than anyone to be a little bitter. A few barren pines is less than the vengeance he deserves. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, I’m pleased that you approve of Bones horticultural methods while in his situation. I agree. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Suncleaver, I agree with you. However, I'm sure Bones will get over some of his bitterness in time, a long time. Bobby |
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