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WifeyMaterial25 New Member
since 2009-02-20
Posts 5 |
Because I cry myself asleep because thats all I can do right. I avoid people because I do not want to remember the pain they gave me. I remain confused because noone wants to understand me. I play my music loud to block you out. I sleep alot so I do not have to deal with being around you. I do not talk alot because I have nothing to say to you. I just need you to leave me alone. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now welcome to Passions! This is a very direct open piece with some anger and an emotional dark side. It comes across well that way. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear WifeyMaterial25, I got a kick out of this poem. Remember, it's "no one", not "noone". Bobby |
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WifeyMaterial25 New Member
since 2009-02-20
Posts 5 |
i really didnt think it was that funny but ill keep that in mind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
There was a time I felt this way... actually I went to the Dr's. because I chose to not leave the house, see people and didn't answer the phone etc... He said he felt I was suffering depression ( based on a temporary situation) and with some short termed medication, I got over the feelings that you have described here well. And that is how I came to be online... Hope these are temporary feelings, if real, for you. M |
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WifeyMaterial25 New Member
since 2009-02-20
Posts 5 |
im not depressed its just a poem |
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