Open Poetry #44 |
Come to Bed... |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
"Come to bed," she softly said... "It was a dream... as you can see; but, Mummy's bed is big and warm... and you'll be safe and snug with me." "Come to bed," she softly said... "Now go and put away your toys. It's nine o'clock... there's school tomorrow. It's too late for little boys." "Come to bed," she softly said... "This party's getting boring, now. My parents are away, tonight... and, I have always fancied you." "Come to bed," she softly said... her silk gown whispering to the floor. Warm and delighting... eyes inviting... reaching back... I close the door. "Come to bed," she softly said... so, up the stairs I carefully creep, so, as not to wake the kids... then... "Goodnight love... let's get some sleep." "Come to bed," she softly said... "And, bring my book up, if you would." Fifty years, we've been together... I've been lucky... it's been good. "Come from your bed," she softly said... Her spreading wings... a brilliant glow. "Your time on earth has run its course... come, take my hand... It's time to go." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
warning. It's only fair to put one in your title if you insist on making me cry! a tissue alert...something....warn a girl before you pull all her heart strings at once (in other words, I loved this) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
clearing the throat lump... |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
A wonderful, wonderful write. I am touched. "You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lump here too |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I guess we're all a bunch of cry babies but this is just so beautiful and touching. Ida |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Ladies are quite entitled to be cry-babies... that's what makes them so enchanting. Thank you ladies... it makes all this scribbling worthwhile. D. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
incredible loved this |
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tao power Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 109 |
this would make a great country ballad. It is very well written. have you ever tried putting it to music? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
3rd stanza...did I miss the rhyme? with that said (asked) I didn't have a lump or tears but was certainly touched by this.. wonderful... boy to man. Very nice writing. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
This is extraordinary. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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