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Tears of the Sun |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Tears of the Sun One might possibly never think that the sun would ever thus sink into its own great, grand reflection that to the low of a great depression Although by twilight’s deep wide gloaming though the sun seems nowhere roaming in the still of this caliginous night it remains there, caught in moonlight And when one is without the day as clouds cast over the sky in gray and in those still and quiet overtones just know the sun is only postponed… For when silently the day comes alive and raindrops might slip through the sky amid the shadows of heavy clouds’ sighs know that God in Heaven also cries… Yet then in the shine of raindrop sent a magical moment is thus spent to see the rainbow’s sheen on high a promise kept in the sun’s blue skies. ~*~ (c)3 August 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel ~*~ Revised 2-23-09 |
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And when one is without the day as clouds cast over the sky in gray and in those still and quiet overtones just know the sun is only postponed…" IWIWT!!!  awesome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Wonderful! Thank you for the edit and for bringing this one back! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...The form, the content...all as beautiful as you are. Impressive read!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true sun gem, dear SUNSHINE Karilea! A joy to read. I am happy that you shared it again for those who were not "around" yet when you first posted it. Wonderful! Love, Margherita  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful...I love this line: "just know the sun is only postponed" |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful and comforting, Karilea. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always a treat to view the work of the sunshine on those things around her |
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Blood.Wolf Member
since 2009-02-09
Posts 54GA, USA |
Amazing. Quite a beautiful piece. “For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack." |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
The ending of this piece is fantastic. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is really amazing. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Can only agree with all of the above! There is ....hope....resolve within this rainbow. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"Yet then in the shine of raindrop sent a magical moment is thus spent to see the rainbow’s sheen on high a promise kept in the sun’s blue skies." Karilea, this is so beautiful.....all of it. So good to read you again. Hugs, Ethel Ethels Love Poetry My SpiritIsUp Poetry Shelf Powered by CGISpy.com |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful poem to read dear Karilea, A real gem, thank you. Love, Lindsay |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Every aspect is beautiful in it's own way Karilea. The finale with the rainbow is a nice touch. Gentle moving write. Eric |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my oh my, this was absolutely beautiful and this I hold near and dear... And when one is without the day as clouds cast over the sky in gray and in those still and quiet overtones just know the sun is only postponed… wonderful write dear lady... hugs |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Thank you for having us walk on sunshine and float on rainclouds |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling heart, Oh My I miss far too much with my head stuck in books. This is stunning work, I love it. These beautiful words are such balm in my soul. Miss you all muchly As always Mushy X x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very beautiful Karilea. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This poem reminds me of what I call my "silver lining" moments. I learned that is so easy to see the worst in things but quite a different story to find the best.  |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful Karilea! |
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