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True Meadow Romance
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True Meadow Romance |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
True Meadow Romance Meadow midday, sun in raise! Hot air quiver, In each phase. Water flows adding River. Butterfly dancing thinning air. Dragonfly break fly, Long grass weaving hair Frogs jump away so shy. Cold water dancing crystalline. Goldenrod and poppy seed, Meadow lark sing unseen. Blue sky heavenly indeed. Sound of Crickets Bullfrog deep. Trees along the passage way, Smell heavy air so sweet. Catching each and every ray, Sing along.. redeep..redeep. Lady bug buzzing free, It’s reciprocating dance. See what I See, A True Meadow Romance. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me want summer!!  very much enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To enhance romance is surely one of the reasons of being of a meadow, such as you describe it so beautifully! Greatly enjoyed. Love, Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful visions ,thank you for sharing the scenery Hope |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiled all the way through, Helmut... I could even imagine that it was a scene you painted...in oils.  Beautiful! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
HelmutB - a true meadow romance, come on spring/summer, where you is... BC |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful word picture meadow romance Helmut. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful picture you've painted with your pen!! *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I would enjoy seeing this scene unfold! Summer really is a symphony of sound, a profusion of colors and scents to greet the eyes and nose. Thanks for sharing this meadow romance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How delightful!!!! Your vivid descriptions engaged all my senses! Nature at it's finest! ~ as is your pen!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this reading experience!  Tra la la la lala! You make me feel like singin' and dancin' and buzzin' like a bee! lol Hang on! This cold Canadian winter will soon be behind us!  Linda |
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MeadowmuseRenewed New Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 4Kentucky USA |
Lovely to see you still appreciate and write (lovingly and with obvious awe) of God's often overlooked creations. I have always enjoyed your unique and simple phrasing. It gives the poem a life-like tenderness all its own. C. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
To all of you I dearly thank you from within my heart You all unique and with such gentle art Your words engulf my poetic needs to ink words in prose and praise. Thank you So so much Also there is a smile, a big smile on my face today, you.......you know as to why My Friend! The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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